scarecrow poetics/essays

Tuesday, March 21, 2006

 

Some Poems...

THESE CLOSE ENCOUNTERS

The woman with the parted lips
She never says a word

Thinking. What are you? Thinking.
Are you?
Thinking…
Think!

Shhh… If you have ears …. Shhhh

All the world for your collar bone…
All the world for your tongue between my teeth…
All the world for your whispering hair…
Here and there and everywhere

Sing me a song
A song of the sea.

Shhhh!


He doesn’t want surrendered secrets.
He doesn’t want to see
See
Saw
So
Sieve
Give
In
Give up
I think it’s time

to

Plaster up her pumping heart
A brief respite from blood

“I am swimming in your skin…”

Plaster up his pumping heart
Let’s never talk of love…

Lick lick lick

Come on kick
Me against it!
I don’t care if you KILL ME
Find me
Kiss me
Hold me
Thrill me….

Thrill me hold me kiss me kill me

Huh
Huh
Huh
Ah
Ah
A
A
A
a!

Uhhhhh…..


What do you do with a drunken sailor!
What do you do with a drunken sailor!

They lie.

Oh well
Okay
Whatever
Never
Mind
Okay okay
We sing the ancient rhyme…

All the world for your eyelash!
All the world for your moustache!


In love she sails
“Oh well!”
She wails.
He drinks his weight.
What else can you do with drunken sailors?


Wobbly. Wobbly. Wobbb b b b b …


You don’t need to explain yourself to me
Just lie
I do
Don’t you?

I do.


Don’t
Think we don’t understand
He saw your shadow turning past
The lights, they run
And now she falls
Beneath the rising sun



WINDING

We can only grasp the air for so long
Before it blows itself away
Breaths its last and
Once again
Is past.

My spirit shattered with love
Can’t you stoop
To pick up the pieces.
Just this once?

I’ll be ok
I’ll be fine
Just stay too close
For me to unwind…



BLISS

Oh bliss
It hurts
This biting bit!
Oh bliss



REGRET 2006 (?)

I would not would would would
No
Not
Would not would
Not
Would
Would
Would
Not not not not not
Would not
Have it
Any other way
Any other way
Any any any any
Other ways
Way ways way


THE UNBEARABLE LIGHTNESS OF BEING

THE UNBEARABLE LIGHTNESS OF BEING
THE SHOCK
THAT SOMETHING QUICK AND HEAVY MAY SILENCE MY BREATH
AND SEVERE A THOUGHT THAT IS ON ITS WAY TO COLIDE WITH ANOTHER THOUGHT….

Cecilia Condon © 2006.


Cecilia Condon likes to make things. Things like songs and characters and words stuck to other words. She makes these things when finds bits of extra time in her hectic schedule of learning about arty stuff and serving champagne and canapés to the corporatos of Melbourne (who kindly share their city with her). Usually there isn’t much time, and this is why she has never published much or been in any blockbuster movies. But watch out, because she is currently working on her second first novel…

Monday, March 20, 2006

 

Central Park Zoo...

The swans drink in the sunlight
then retreat to the patches of shade
by the light
rippling on the water.

Small children run
into the quilts of light,
and cannot see the graceful creatures.

Up, up, up, they ask their mothers
to lift them
above the light.

Light like the silver oars
from ancient
golden boats.

Light dividing the day
marking the inevitable retreat of swans
and children
from their mothers’ arms.

Lisa Williams © 2006.


Lisa Williams is a Professor of Literature at Ramapo College of New Jersey, and lives in New York City. She is the author of Letters to Virginia Woolf and also The Artist as Outsider in the Novels of Toni Morrison and Virginia Woolf.

See this interview at RSB and this Scarecrow review.

posted by scarecrow  # 2:11 PM
 

The Bathers...

for Walt Whitman

Twenty-eight women bathe by the shore
Twenty-eight women
their breasts full
bellies round
skinny dipping

Twenty-eight naked women
dance on water
Twenty- eight women arise
from the dreams
of sea and shore

Lisa Williams © 2006.


Lisa Williams is a Professor of Literature at Ramapo College of New Jersey, and lives in New York City. She is the author of Letters to Virginia Woolf and also The Artist as Outsider in the Novels of Toni Morrison and Virginia Woolf.

See this interview at RSB and this Scarecrow review.

posted by scarecrow  # 2:10 PM
 

The Blackbirds Filled the Sky With Song...

For Larry Tell

As we filled your grave with dirt,
and watered the ground with our tears,
the blackbirds gathered.

A semicircle of blackbirds,
a horseshoe of blackbirds,

glided across the sky with ease,
as if to form the song,
of one
immortal nightingale.

Just when we thought
the birds were out of sight,

and we were left with the rain
drizzling down
to surround our sorrow,

the blackbirds turned round
to fly once more above your grave.

We could only look up silently,
at the blackbirds in the gray sky
singing of the freedom
the dead must know.

Lisa Williams © 2006.


Lisa Williams is a Professor of Literature at Ramapo College of New Jersey, and lives in New York City. She is the author of Letters to Virginia Woolf and also The Artist as Outsider in the Novels of Toni Morrison and Virginia Woolf.

See this interview at RSB and this Scarecrow review.

posted by scarecrow  # 2:08 PM

Sunday, March 19, 2006

 

ARF ROCK...

my shit-smelling finger
alright

Travis Jeppesen © 2006.

Travis Jeppesen was born. He wrote a novel. It's called Victims. It was published in America by Akashic Books, and in Russia by Eksmo. His new book is called Poems I Wrote While Watching TV. It has illustrations by Jeremiah Palecek, and will come out in March. His work has/will appear(ed) in Purple, Prague Literary Review, 3am Magazine, Another Magazine, ZOO, thefanzine.com, New York Press, Bookforum, Pretend I Am Someone Else, Thee Flat Bike, dorfdisco.de, Pavement Magazine, Shampoo Poetry, Can We Have Our Ball Back, and a bunch of other places you've probably never heard of. He edits BLATT.


posted by scarecrow  # 12:25 PM
 

formoverform...

form over form
cock






ting

Travis Jeppesen © 2006.

Travis Jeppesen was born. He wrote a novel. It's called Victims. It was published in America by Akashic Books, and in Russia by Eksmo. His new book is called Poems I Wrote While Watching TV. It has illustrations by Jeremiah Palecek, and will come out in March. His work has/will appear(ed) in Purple, Prague Literary Review, 3am Magazine, Another Magazine, ZOO, thefanzine.com, New York Press, Bookforum, Pretend I Am Someone Else, Thee Flat Bike, dorfdisco.de, Pavement Magazine, Shampoo Poetry, Can We Have Our Ball Back, and a bunch of other places you've probably never heard of. He edits BLATT.


posted by scarecrow  # 12:22 PM
 

Poem...

things
happen
all the time


Travis Jeppesen © 2006.

Travis Jeppesen was born. He wrote a novel. It's called Victims. It was published in America by Akashic Books, and in Russia by Eksmo. His new book is called Poems I Wrote While Watching TV. It has illustrations by Jeremiah Palecek, and will come out in March. His work has/will appear(ed) in Purple, Prague Literary Review, 3am Magazine, Another Magazine, ZOO, thefanzine.com, New York Press, Bookforum, Pretend I Am Someone Else, Thee Flat Bike, dorfdisco.de, Pavement Magazine, Shampoo Poetry, Can We Have Our Ball Back, and a bunch of other places you've probably never heard of. He edits BLATT.


posted by scarecrow  # 12:19 PM
 

Oh Cunt...

A painter of cunt I’ve always been—OH CUNT!—
But I’ve worked almost exclusively in watercolor daubs
of the utmost timidity, not with brushstrokes of any boldness
or aggression—because I’ve always been afraid of my subject,
afraid of the beauty of sweet sticky life and all the horrible
things it could do to me …

But that’s not half as sad as how I’ve usually painted
a woman’s head: as a barely differentiated blob, without
eyes to reveal her pain, joy, or even curiosity, or a mouth
that might just tell me “No, my heart’s not for you and even
the cunt you’re painting is not mine but your own little-boy
fantasy that hurts me more than you can seem to know …”

“OH CUNT!” indeed

But oh cunt I still love thee—but now I hope like a child
who wants to grow up, like a suddenly young artist who is
finally taking the time to learn the rudiments of anatomy …
the line of a cheekbone, the oval of the mouth, the chambers
of the heart … both my subject’s and my own …

I will always paint cunts, but those soon slick with love, I hope,
slick with love as well as tongue and groan … as sparkling eyes
look down upon my work in shivering approval ...

Richard Woodard © 2006.


ROB WOODARD was born in Anaheim, California in 1964 and raised mostly in the nearby Long Beach area. After graduating high school, he dropped in and out of various community colleges and worked mostly in restaurants in southern California, Hawaii, and Australia, while taking breaks to wander aimlessly across big swaths of the globe. During these years he wrote consistently in search of his voice as a writer. Frustrated by his lack of progress, he returned to school and eventually obtained bachelors and masters degrees in anthropology from California State University, Long Beach. After a brief stint as a college professor, he returned to working in restaurants and writing. Burning Shore Press recently published Heaping Stones, his first novel. What Love Is, his second novel, is scheduled to be released by the same house in the summer/early fall of 2006. He is currently writing poetry, book reviews, and a journal.

Contact: bsp@burningshorepress.com

posted by scarecrow  # 12:17 PM
 

My Formal Sleep...

The ridged perfection of my sleep: on my semi-side (which side
doesn’t matter of course) leg cocked in balanced tension with what’s
going on with my arms, shoulders, neck, and everything
in between and beyond, like some very formal sculpture, where
every muscle, tendon, and twitch is accounted for with an exact
counterpoint, whether I’m in Greek Olympic shot-put pose or
tightly gripping my hard dick in sexual frustration beyond
blinding or bitterly coiled and ready to strike out at this terrible life
and all it has done to me …

OH GOD OR GODS! OH MYSELF!—ALLOW ME TO TRULY SLEEP!

Allow me to release the pain and anger of my failures that so
haunts me, that drives me into a rage where I’m continually
taking swings at the empty darkness of my walled eternity
thru flailing dreams remembered or not, while also plotting
new ways to hate myself, new ways to punish myself for all
the lies I’ve told myself that shielded me from the flowering
cowardice that has always kept my life from being what
it could have been, should have been, what it should be …

Oh God or Gods! Oh myself!—Allow me the gift of deep sleep,
allow my body to splay wherever it needs to under covers warm
and luxurious, as a by-product of a life that is finally on track,
a life that has finally been accepted by a man who has always
hated himself, by a man whose heart seems to have been broken
at birth by a world that he doesn’t feel has ever really wanted
him, by a world that seems to have commanded that his love
be left forever dying on the vine …

Richard Woodard © 2006.


ROB WOODARD was born in Anaheim, California in 1964 and raised mostly in the nearby Long Beach area. After graduating high school, he dropped in and out of various community colleges and worked mostly in restaurants in southern California, Hawaii, and Australia, while taking breaks to wander aimlessly across big swaths of the globe. During these years he wrote consistently in search of his voice as a writer. Frustrated by his lack of progress, he returned to school and eventually obtained bachelors and masters degrees in anthropology from California State University, Long Beach. After a brief stint as a college professor, he returned to working in restaurants and writing. Burning Shore Press recently published Heaping Stones, his first novel. What Love Is, his second novel, is scheduled to be released by the same house in the summer/early fall of 2006. He is currently writing poetry, book reviews, and a journal.

Contact: bsp@burningshorepress.com


posted by scarecrow  # 12:14 PM
 

Coffeehouse Poem (to Michelle)...

What if I were to place my head in your lap
while we’re lounging on some coffeehouse couch
and you were to begin running your fingers thru my hair
with great understanding, and this was to go on
for a full hour without either of saying a word
because we simply felt no need to talk?

Would this make us lovers, or would we have
to actually fuck before it became official?

Most people I meet seem to be living their lives
hemmed in by layers of rules they never question
while shooting for benchmarks carved by the averaging out
of generations of dreams—by the dilution of each of us,
in other words

But this would all crumble on such a coffeehouse couch,
with such fingers caressing in silence—and we would find love,
I’m sure, in the simultaneous understanding that love reveals rules
to be non-existent, while also seeing that this knowledge can make
our lives truly different than the lives of those who surround us,
at least when we’re together …

Richard Woodard © 2006.


ROB WOODARD was born in Anaheim, California in 1964 and raised mostly in the nearby Long Beach area. After graduating high school, he dropped in and out of various community colleges and worked mostly in restaurants in southern California, Hawaii, and Australia, while taking breaks to wander aimlessly across big swaths of the globe. During these years he wrote consistently in search of his voice as a writer. Frustrated by his lack of progress, he returned to school and eventually obtained bachelors and masters degrees in anthropology from California State University, Long Beach. After a brief stint as a college professor, he returned to working in restaurants and writing. Burning Shore Press recently published Heaping Stones, his first novel. What Love Is, his second novel, is scheduled to be released by the same house in the summer/early fall of 2006. He is currently writing poetry, book reviews, and a journal.

Contact: bsp@burningshorepress.com



posted by scarecrow  # 12:11 PM
 

After Richard Hell in West Hollywood...

For Michelle Murufas

It’s coolish outside standing on the street—fall night
in West Hollywood—but the little bookstore in which
we just saw Richard Hell read from his novel GODLIKE
is hot and stuffy

So, not wanting to go back into the cramped airless bookstore
to stand in the long line to get our copies signed,
we walk down the street a ways to this bar we saw on the
way to the reading—where we sit on the patio so Michelle
can smoke—and order draft beers and a plate of fries, which
we’re enjoying as out of the corners of our eyes we watch
1960s-era Bob Dylan sing on the giant Tower Records video screen
across the street, while we talk warm and personal about things
that really matter to us, like why love has hurt us so much and how
we’re somehow moving on from this pain and I think about
how surreal the Richard Hell-enormous Bob Dylan-
West Hollywood night probably is, even though
I’m not really noticing this because the conversation Michelle and I
are engaged in is so easy and truthful and without pretension
that it’s actually drowning out fucked up Hollywood,
actually emerging as something that’s usually impossible:
everyday life triumphing over myth …

“Do you want another beer?” I ask Michelle

She does not, but I do, so I order one from the
silly L.A. blonde waitress who I can tell is
a little annoyed by the fact that I care only about
Michelle at this moment and am not noticing her bleached
“beauty” which she needs to be sure is so much more attractive
than Michelle’s coffee-and-cigarettes post-punk pallor,
while I feel happy because I’m so locked into this
conversation with Michelle and also because the waitress
is interested in me enough to be jealous and because
everything is just so perfect that I wouldn’t change one
moment of the simple humanity we’re somehow discovering
in ourselves on Sunset Boulevard of all places …

Richard Woodard © 2006.


ROB WOODARD was born in Anaheim, California in 1964 and raised mostly in the nearby Long Beach area. After graduating high school, he dropped in and out of various community colleges and worked mostly in restaurants in southern California, Hawaii, and Australia, while taking breaks to wander aimlessly across big swaths of the globe. During these years he wrote consistently in search of his voice as a writer. Frustrated by his lack of progress, he returned to school and eventually obtained bachelors and masters degrees in anthropology from California State University, Long Beach. After a brief stint as a college professor, he returned to working in restaurants and writing. Burning Shore Press recently published Heaping Stones, his first novel. What Love Is, his second novel, is scheduled to be released by the same house in the summer/early fall of 2006. He is currently writing poetry, book reviews, and a journal.

Contact: bsp@burningshorepress.com




posted by scarecrow  # 11:43 AM
 

Two Poems...

SCAPEGOAT TWIGGY

Waif skin
and fat lashes.
Your space-age smile
made us all
healthy
star-
vers.

OPTIMISM

Is a theory proposed by stomachs.
As a girl,
she invades my mother's house.
Eats our frozen chicken.
When she's full, she starts to hurt-
like this situation's too optimistic.
It's bound to go wrong.
I sigh out flowers on the deck.
The petals rip one by one-
the girl lives-the girl dies-the girl lives,
I hope.

In Ham Lake, helicopters
have been circling for a week.
In the woods, they swoop in low.
I sit with my mother on the deck.
She claims a dealer is loose,
another meth-lab discovered.
In front of tomorrow's headlines,
I tell her helicopters can't be
that bad.
My stomach's empty.

Glenna Myles © 2006.

Glenna Myles currently lives and writes in Los Angeles, CA.


posted by scarecrow  # 4:24 AM
 

The Complicity of Paul Celan...

[EDITORIAL NOTE: This provocative essay has recently caused a flurry of online responses, most fervidly from Mark Thwaite and Stephen Mitchelmore. Ellis Sharp has also published a response. Although Short Term Memory Loss's sardonic effort had all here at Scarecrow guffawing endlessly. We expect this one to run and run. The views published below are not necessarily those of Scarecrow's Editorial team.]

Two pieces of writing define the poet Paul Celan’s relationship with the philosopher Martin Heidegger. One is his inscription in Heidegger’s guest book, which translates as: “Into the Hütte-book, while gazing on the well-star, with a hope for a word to come in the heart / July 25 1967”. The other is his famous poem ‘Todtnauberg’. Both pieces are reasonably interpreted as obliquely alluding to Heidegger’s relationship with the Nazis. Celan evidently hoped for some kind of acknowledgement of error on Heidegger’s part – an acknowledgement which Celan, as a Holocaust victim, was surely entitled to expect.

Notoriously, Heidegger kept his silence. Heidegger, delighted by ‘Todtnauberg’, seems to have been oblivious to the poem’s inner meaning and its verbal and historical resonance. At the end, Celan wrote of ‘die halb- / beschrittenen Knüppel- / pfade im Hochmoor,’ [‘the half-trodden log-paths through the high moors’]. But as John Felstiner notes in his fine critical biography Paul Celan: Poet, Survivor, Jew (1995), “in an explosive wordplay, Celan’s term for ‘log’ (Knüppel) also means ‘bludgeon.’ Translating Night and Fog he had used that word for death camp prisoners “ ‘bludgeoned awake’ at 5 a.m.”

The meeting between Heidegger and Celan is both legendary and enigmatic; it is invariably defined from Celan’s perspective. How could it not be? Celan (1920-1970), an East European Jew whose first language was German, is generally regarded as the the major European poet of the period after 1945. His best known poem is “Todesfuge” (“Death Fugue”), which is probably the finest poem to emerge from the Holocaust. It originated in Celan’s personal experience. During the Nazi occupation of Romania, Celan came home one morning to find that his parents had been taken away. His father died of typhus in a concentration camp; his mother was shot. Celan himself was made to do forced labour in the Romanian camps, but survived. In 1948 he settled in Paris, where he remained until his death, apparently by suicide.

And yet to my mind there is a curious absence in a book such as Felstiner’s, which is Paul Celan’s own complicity in oppression and injustice. It is even more curious bearing in mind that the year in which Heidegger and Celan had their famous encounter is also the year which brings out in Celan’s writing an obtuseness which surely, at some level, parallels that of Heidegger.

Felstiner notes that in 1967 Celan had started to insert Hebrew words into some of his poems. He concludes that “Celan’s poems with Hebrew in them, especially with Hebrew ending them, trace a meridian of Diaspora yearning.” (p. 240) He relates the enigmatic poem “Ziw, jenes Licht”” (“Ziv, that light”) to the deteriorating situation in the Middle East: “By the date of this poem, 10 May 1967, Syrian raids and shelling had been met by Israeli air attacks, terrorists had struck the Galilee, and Nasser’s Egypt was threatening in the south.” (p. 241) Celan then wrote a poem ‘Denk dir’ (translated by Hamburger as ‘Think of It’ and by Felstiner as ‘Just think’) which appears to be a direct response to the Six Day War.

THINK OF IT

Think of it:
the bog soldier of Massada
teaches himself home, most
inextinguishably,
against
every barb in the wire.

Think of it:
the eyeless with no shape
lead you free through the tumult, you
grow stronger and
stronger.

Think of it: your
own hand
has held
this bit of
habitable
earth, suffered up
again
into life.

Think of it:
this came towards me
name-awake, hand-awake
for ever,
from the unburiable.


This is Paul Celan’s poem ‘Denk dir’, taken from the dual language edition published by Penguin Books in 1990, translated by Michael Hamburger. In his critical biography, John Felstiner translates the title as ‘Just think’.

It’s a cryptic, elusive poem, like most of Celan’s verse. Felstiner carefully unpicks the historical and literary threads of the poem, interpreting it as a response to the Six-Day War and to Israel’s victory. The “you” of the poem is the Jewish people. The poem is being about the Jewish “homeland” and the Jewish people. “Now free, they go from strength to strength”, as Felstiner puts it (p. 242). Felstiner notes that an early draft of the poem carried an echo of the words “yad vashem”, which is Hebrew for “hand and name” and the name given to Israel’s Holocaust memorial. Felstiner glosses the last word of the poem as follows: “Finally, Celan’s word ‘unburiable’ fuses the two halves of one idea: Jewish victims who could not be buried and their spirit that will not.” (ibid)

Felstiner supplies the background to the poem. He describes how the Six-Day War broke out, “stirring him to an unambiguous poem. Starting on 7 June, when Jerusalem’s Old City was regained, Celan worked closely on it for two days at the clinic. His title ‘Denk dir’ registered the jolt that Jews everywhere felt”. (ibid) Celan felt an urgency about this poem: it was published straightaway in Zurich and twice in Israel’s German-Jewish press. Celan sent it to the German-born Israeli poet Natan Zach, who published a translation in Israel’s main daily paper. Later in the year it appeared in Germany, and it was the final poem in his next collection Fadensonnen (“Threadsuns”, 1968).

If Felstiner is right, in this poem Celan conflated Jewish identity with the Jewish state. It seems a plausible interpretation. The Jewish “home” is Israel; it is a refuge which has now been “inextinguishably” achieved against “every barb in the wire” – not just Nazi genocide but also, perhaps, Arab aggression. The Jewish people have come “through the tumult” – again, both Nazi genocide and wars with Arabs – and “grow stronger and / stronger”, in the shape of the victorious Jewish state, “this bit of / habitable /earth”.

If Felstiner’s interpretation of the poem is correct – and I see no reason to quarrel with it– it seems to me it indicates an imaginative failure on Celan’s part. Paul Celan was not a Zionist, and preferred to live in Paris rather than anywhere else, but in conflating Jewish identity with Israel and telescoping the Holocaust and the Six-Day War he produced what is surely in essence a Zionist poem. Like most of Celan’s output, ‘Denk dir’ is an oblique, elusive work. But John Felstiner’s plausible reading both of the poem and its context makes it clear that ‘Denk dir’ is, implicitly, under its abstractions and ambiguities, on the side of Israel, and hence of imperialism and sectarian persecution – though Felstiner is incapable of perceiving it in those terms. That the author of “Todesfuge” should be capable of such a poem is, I think, interesting, and worthy of discussion.

What particularly intrigues me are the lines

this bit of
habitable
earth

If I have understood the poem correctly Celan means, in one sense at least, Israel. If he does mean this, then I think the reader is entitled to feel disgust. Firstly, because this land was land stolen by brute force. In 1948, the year Israel was artificially created, no more than 7 per cent of Palestine was owned by Jews. The remaining 93 per cent was held by indigenous Palestinians. Secondly, having stolen more than half of that land the Jewish state then set about seizing the rest, using a pitiless violence steeped in racism and sectarianism – a process which has continued up to the present day. Today only 3 per cent of land in Israel is owned by Palestinians, a land theft of quite staggering proportions. That theft was not simply accomplished by force, however. An essential component was the sectarianism built into the Jewish state. By definition, it exists to promote and prioritize its Jewish citizens.

This is the corrosive legacy of Zionism and the Jewish state to the history and culture of modern Judaism: that Jewish identity must be conflated with the bellicose, blood-drenched, pitilessly sectarian state of Israel. That coarse identification is taken for granted by Felstiner, whose own Zionist bias is revealed when he speaks of the origins of ‘Denk dir’: “Starting on 7 June, when Jerusalem’s Old City was regained, he worked closely on it for two days in the clinic.”

Jerusalem’s Old City “regained”?

*

In the Zionist version of history, Jews in the Middle East are always the victims, never the oppressors. It’s worth looking again at Felstiner’s version of the origins of the 1967 war: “By the date of this poem, 10 May 1967, Syrian raids and shelling had been met by Israeli air attacks, terrorists had struck the Galilee, and Nasser’s Egypt was threatening in the south.”

In reality, Felstiner’s account of what was happening in the Middle East at this time is a meretricious, self-serving one. Israel had signed up to a demilitarized zone (DMZ) between itself and Syria. In the words of Ahron Bregman in his book Israel’s Wars: A History Since 1947 (Routledge, 2003), “The Israelis – who had signed up to this arrangement voluntarily rather than under a Diktat – later regretted this, and attempted to regain control over these lands by provoking the Syrians and then taking advantage of military clashes to expand control over the DMZ.” (pp. 65-66) Israel was the bellicose aggressor, not Syria. What Felstiner is referring to by “terrorists had struck the Galilee” is puzzling. None of the standard histories mentions guerrilla activities in early 1967; perhaps he is alluding to attacks by Fatah on Israeli water pipes in 1965. If so, the word “terrorist” is fairly meaningless in this context, since Fatah guerrillas were legitimately resisting the colonisation of their land by an army of occupation, and their actions were no different to those of the French resistance in the Second World War. The theft of Palestinian water resources by Israel has always been a central aspect of the conflict, though rarely if ever mentioned by the media.

What caused the 1967 war? In his book The Iron Wall: Israel and the Arab World (Penguin, 2001), Avi Shlaim concludes: “Israel’s strategy of escalation on the Syrian front was probably the single most important factor in dragging the Middle East to war in June 1967” (p. 235).

Finally, Felstiner says that “Nasser’s Egypt was threatening in the south.” But this again plays down the reality of Israeli aggression. In 1967 Egypt was in the sphere of Soviet influence. Nasser was firmly told by the Russian prime minister Alexei Kosygin not to attack Israel: “Should you be the first to attack you will be the aggressor…we are against aggression…we cannot support you.” (Cited Bregman, p. 82) The USA was not so scrupulous. Israel was informed by the CIA that the Americans would welcome it if Egypt was attacked. When the Israeli delegate to Washington, Meir Amit, told the Secretary of Defense that he would recommend to the Israeli government that an attack be launched, Robert MacNamara replied: “I read you loud and clear.”

The surprise Israeli attack on Egypt, Jordan and Syria which occurred on 5 June 1967 happened with the advance knowledge and enthusiastic support of the USA and Britain. The extent of British complicity is revealed in Jeremy Bowen’s book Six Days (2003). Shiploads of armoured vehicles, munitions and other weaponry sailed from Felixstowe in Suffolk, where U.S. military police guarded an arms dump. Israeli transport planes ran a shuttle service out of RAF Waddington in Lincolnshire. The Labour Prime Minister, Harold Wilson, had agreed to help Israel, but insisted that “the utmost secrecy should be maintained.” Arms for Israel poured in from the USA. In the surprise attack that followed Israel duly wiped out the air forces of Egypt, Syria and Jordan. With complete air superiority, Israel had no difficulty in defeating the land armies of those states. 12,000 Egyptians died in the Israeli offensive. The result was the occupation of the entire Sinai peninsula, the West Bank and the Golan Heights.

In short, Felstiner’s book is both classically orientalist and Zionist in its attitudes.

*

Felstiner’s complacency becomes particularly acute when he describes how in 1969 Paul Celan visited Israel for the first time. Celan made a speech to the Hebrew Writers Association in Tel Aviv on 14 October, in which he said:

I have come to you in Israel because I needed to.

As seldom with such a feeling, I have the strongest sense, after all I’ve seen and heard, of having done the right thing – not for me alone, I hope.

I think I have a notion of what Jewish loneliness can be, and I recognize as well, amongst so many things, a thankful pride in every green thing planted here that stands ready to refresh anyone who comes by; just as I take joy in every newly earned, self-discovered, fulfilled word that rushes up to strengthen those who turn toward it – I take that joy during this time of growing self-alienation and mass conformity everywhere. And I find here, in this outward and inward landscape, much of the force for truth, the self-evidentness, and the world-open uniqueness of great poetry. And I believe I’ve been conversing with those who are calmly, confidently determined to stand firm in what is human.

Celan enjoyed himself in Israel. He said he was “happy to have lived so intensively, more intensively than for a long time… I’m already thinking of coming back.”

Felstiner comments, “Celan was also struck by the memoir a veteran Israeli writer had given him and by how, during Arab attacks on Jews in pre-state Jerusalem, Christians put crosses on their doors for immunity.” (p. 268) Felstiner adds: “Celan wrote to this writer of his ‘anxiety for Israel’.”

And that’s the only way in which Arabs are, very briefly, registered in this book. Aggressive Arab nations make trouble for the Jewish state which is obliged to defend itself. Arabs attacked Jews in pre-state Jerusalem – for reasons not given. In the index of Felstiner’s book you will find 36 references listed under “ant-Semitism” (together with the recommendation to ‘See also Nazism; Neo-Nazism’). But “Palestinians” are not listed; nor is “Arab” or “Arabs”.

As far as I can tell (though there is a vast commentary on Celan in German which has not been translated into English) Paul Celan seems to have had no perception at all of Israel as a chauvinist sectarian state founded on the violent persecution of the indigenous population. The dogged anti-Zionist Mark Elfrecently defined the basic problem of the Jewish state:

Israel exists on the basis of three things: colonial settlement, ethnic cleansing and racist laws. As far as I know it is the only state that exists on that basis. Now recognising Israel's right to exist recognises its right to those three things.

As far as I can tell, Paul Celan lacked the insight of Marek Edelman, recently cited by Elf:

Why did Marek Edelman remain in Poland [after the Second World War) as a doctor when almost all his Jewish political colleagues and people close to him personally left? Edelman used to come, now and then, to Israel, to see old friends, but no one had ever publicly asked him this question, though he had a very good answer: he didn’t like the idea of the ‘new nation’. In fact, Edelman was always very critical not only of Israelis’ attitude to the Holocaust, but also of more sensitive issues – such as our racist laws of citizenship. In a late interview he told a Polish journalist: ‘Israel is a chauvinist, religious state, where a Christian is a second-class citizen and a Muslim is third-class. It is a disaster, after three million were murdered in Poland, they want to dominate everything and not to consider non-Jews!’

Celan is the great poet of the Holocaust and one of his central themes is that of loss – one of his greatest poems is ‘Aspen tree’, about his dead mother. But as far as I’m aware Celan seems to have had no perception that the invention of a Jewish state involved the ruthless sectarian persecution of a people, who also suffered and who also experienced loss. Paul Celan happily accepted the privilege of travelling to Israel, because of his identity as a privileged member of the master religion.

Celan’s complacency needs to be contrasted with what happened to to the Palestinian poet Mourid Barghouti. After Israel invaded and occupied that rump of Palestine known as the West Bank in 1967 it forbade native Palestinians abroad the right of return to their homeland. It did so for no other reason than racism and the basic ambition of the sectarian Jewish state of combating democracy by artificially maintaining a Jewish majority. The demographic problem was initially dealt with in 1948 by expelling the Arab majority; it was perpetuated in 1967 by the simple device of refusing to re-admit Arabs who lived in the newly occupied territories and who happened to be outside them when the Israeli army took control.

As he describes in his memoir I Saw Ramallah (2004), Barghouti found himself stranded in Cairo. He was not alone. In his words, Israel forbade “hundreds of thousands of young people to return. And the world finds us a name for us. They called us zaiheen, the displaced ones. Displacement is like death. One thinks it happens only to other people. From the summer of ’67 I became that displaced stranger whom I had always thought was someone else.”

And Paul Celan? His personal knowledge of sectarian persecution and displacement was as bitter as anyone’s can be. But he could only perceive Jews as victims, not as racists and persecutors. There was, apparently, not a glimmer of knowledge or understanding of the plight of someone like Mourid Barghouti who, like Celan, became a poet out of his experience of persecution.

Visiting Israel, Celan enjoyed his sectarian privileges as a Jew. Though a total stranger to the Middle East, he was a welcome guest in Israel. While Celan read his poems to admiring audiences, Barghouti was exiled. Barghouti, a native, was banned from his homeland. Barghouti was prevented from going to the places where a foreign Jew like Paul Celan could travel freely. And Barghouti, after 29 years of being excluded, found himself, on his return visit, still persecuted: “The others are still masters of the place. They give you a permit. They check your papers. They start your files on you. They make you wait.”

Mourid Barghouti was born in 1944. In 1996, briefly, he was permitted to return to the land from which he had been excluded in 1967. He was able once again to view the room in which he was born, “four years before the birth of the State of Israel”. He revisited the sites of his younger days. The wood at al-Nabi Saleh, for example. But now everything was changed. “Israel seized the wood and large tracts of the lands surrounding it. It built houses and brought in settlers. The road leading to the wood – like all roads leading to the settlements – is closed to Palestinians and for the use of the Israelis alone.”

On his visit to Israel in 1969, Paul Celan gushed about his “thankful pride in every green thing planted here that stands ready to refresh anyone who comes by”. Anyone? No, not anyone. Celan’s complacency and ignorance is stupefying. Here, he reminds me of nothing so much as a gullible West European Communist in the 1930s, visiting Stalinist Russia and discovering there a workers’ paradise.

Mourid Barghouti’s experience was rather different. On his return to Ramallah he saw that “There is less green now since Israel has been stealing the water since 1967”. The pitiless theft of Arab land and Arab water has always been a central feature of Zionism and the sectarian state it gave birth to. So, too, has the denial of access to water to Israeli Arabas. Even today, 80,000 Israeli Arabs are deliberately denied access to clean drinking water and sanitation. They are forced to rely on contaminated water. Children contract hepatitis and die. And yet Paul Celan, blind to the chauvinism and racism of the Jewish state, could see only delightful and refreshing greenery.

The issues of land and water, touched on by Celan in his poem and in his speech, remain every bit as relevant to day as they did in the late 1960s. Referring to the withdrawal of Jewish colonialists from Gaza, Mustafa Barghouti (no relation to the poet) noted [‘The Truth You Don’ Hear’, 9 January 2006 AL-AHRAM Weekly Online]:

Israel had already exhausted the water resources in Gaza by tapping the flow of underground water east of Gaza resulting in the seepage of seawater into Gaza’s coastal aquifer and through the over-pumping of the existing aquifer by Israeli settlements. As such, Gazans have been left with brackish water resources that cause high rates of kidney failure. The maximum accepted level of chloride in drinking water, as set by World Health Organisation standards, is 250 mg per litre. In most areas of Gaza, the level stands between 1,200 and 2,500 mg per litre.

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To Paul Celan, Israel’s victory in 1967 was a cause for celebration – a free people, the Jews, going “from strength to strength”. Mourid Barghouti saw it differently:

Our calendars are broken, overlaid with pain, with bitter jokes and the smell of extinction. There are numbers now that can never again be neutral: they will always mean one thing. Since the defeat of June 1967 it is not possible for me to see the number ‘67’ without it being tied to that defeat. I see it in part of a telephone number, on the door of a hotel room, on the license plate of a car, in any street in the world, on a cinema or theatre ticket, on a page in a book, in the address of an office or a house, at the front of a train, or a flight number on an electronic board in any airport in the world. A number frozen in its frame.

John Felstiner’s book on Celan no longer seems to me as admirable as it once did. And neither does Paul Celan. It is dispiriting to perceive how the great poet of loss and suffering was silent about Israel’s victims. And Celan’s silence about Jews as persecutors and their victims appears to be reciprocated by everyone who writes about him.

Ellis Sharp © 2006.

posted by scarecrow  # 4:00 AM
 

One Of My Old Jobs...

‘One of my old jobs was working as a locksmith.
I had to break into cars and houses, all that stuff,
and change the locks when people couldn’t afford rent.
So I would go along with the landlord and the cops
while the bailiffs got all heavy,
chucking people down the stairs,
and I said to the cops, aren’t you gonna step in?
And they said, fuck ’em.
Once, they chucked this mum
and her two little kids into the street,
and the landlord said,
you can swap the locks now mate.
And I couldn’t.
I was really shaking.’

Merrick Palmer © 2006

Merrick Palmer graduated from Bath Spa University College in 2002 with a first class degree in Creative Writing under the tutelage of Philip Gross and Tim Liardet. His poetry considers how the transience of the surrounding world shapes the inner landscape of daily living. It examines a number of voices and personas, both child and adult, and not always his own, moving within a terrain where experiences conjure significance beyond the banal.


posted by scarecrow  # 3:57 AM
 

Her First Dance...

I was looking forward to bluebells.
The woods droned with April –
Stretching out of winter,
Tuning-up for spring.

But I was early.
One frail beauty among empty stems,
First up to dance, bent under inspection.
I plucked her away before music.

Several years later
She’s too fragile to exhume
From this hardback. She’s wept her bloom –
Her dress is nearly white.

She’s poised,
Then she twists
Away from the spine –

Spins all the way down.

Merrick Palmer © 2005


Merrick Palmer graduated from Bath Spa University College in 2002 with a first class degree in Creative Writing under the tutelage of Philip Gross and Tim Liardet. His poetry considers how the transience of the surrounding world shapes the inner landscape of daily living. It examines a number of voices and personas, both child and adult, and not always his own, moving within a terrain where experiences conjure significance beyond the banal.


posted by scarecrow  # 3:49 AM
 

About Florida, France, Germany and everything else...

You haven't watched the news this evening
therefore
you'd hardly catch
that in France the trains have run off the rails
that in Germany
the snow-storms have obstructed the highways
the others round them have escaped the frost somehow

and this summer
Florida was devastated by the typhoons

France Germany and the others
that have escaped somehow
not that they are not used to it
to stand the rage
icy spell
and to anticipate the next big wave

not that they are not used to it

But just dare to tell me that the world
in some child's notebook is a cute heart
almond-shaped in the left side

Observed from whatever angle on the map
Florida resembles a phallus
frankly speaking it's asking for
the typhoons

slight echo of the arch
slight earthquake
everything else

what else what more
there are no victims, are there
or there are some

Everything else for which I started all this
is only between you and me
the only culprit for love's not around any more

Rositza Pironska 2006.

posted by scarecrow  # 3:48 AM
 

A yellow spot...

I cast it off that pain, I gave away one of my rings, the other one with the little white stone has disappeared, my eyes ache terribly, I found a heap of handkerchiefs, the old cracked cap's broken

One vast beach. Love too. The water is green. In Sozopol, I was dropped again in that vagueness of not knowing where I am. Most of the time I thought about Antibes, ‘cause of the bend of the beach

Love too is the vast beach. That's so because of the couple I spot at the end of the beach, the man resembles very much the one I want to make love to me. This was what first struck me. The sky is slightly drawled, the dusk grows out from behind the horizon, only the green water still glows

The next day the man I want to make love to me was squatting at the edge of the water and I heard him speak about doves, gazing at one yellow spot, I heard him repeating now and then "Turn me around". Before long he stood up, went to the parasol, got dressed - my, in this heat! - and went back to the edge squatting again

He squatted for quite a long time then he threw the yellow beach towel on his head and followed the sun, the water and the foam, carrying his slippers in his left hand and I didn't see him disappearing, just suddenly I perceived that he'd simply gone . . . the man I want to make love to me, with a head more yellow than the sun

For a few minutes I was bewitched. That huge resemblance. His eccentric behaviour attracted me more and more. How his legs didn't ache to squat days on end, dressed in this sultriness!

The meteorologist reported on the century's hottest summer, all around poured in the sea, but he continued squatting under the parasol looking fixedly at his own hands, which he moved so as though playing with a web . . . until she appeared . . . until she came back from the sea with her ruby hair

They didn't speak to each other, nevertheless they understood each other. They hardly stayed together. Either she bathed, or he walked along the coast with his towel on his head. He was missing for quite a long time. When he finally came back, she plunged once more into the sea and so on until they left the beach. In the meantime, when they were together, she spotted that I was looking at him and that he was carried away. The resemblance was to blame

I couldn't resist and one night I made up my mind that I would introduce myself to them the following day. I coined various scenarios how I should explain to them that I had took him for someone else and that as a matter of fact

The next day they didn't come, neither did they come the day after next, they escaped . . . and me? I remained looking at one yellow spot

Rositza Pironska © 2006

posted by scarecrow  # 3:39 AM
 

Logical Engineering...

FIGHT THE LAW, FIGHT THE LAW.
Thing is if my mum got raped I would call the law
So I painted DON’T FUCK THE FUZZ after it
Some old girl with her afghan hound comes along
She scoffs and rasps and coughs

Then I felt confused because really the law are alright
Because of when some cunt nicked my car.
So I just left DON’T FUCK THE FUZZ
I scratch my head and then so does Bobby
Dirty fingers smell of dirty knickers

Us ragged faced philanthropists
Dragging a brush on the floor
Pincer our fags between cracked lips
Bobby drew a big cock and I carried on squinting and thinking
Dripping, smoking, straining and crouching

We fought the law and it was a draw.
Everyone just went home,
Johnny, Bobby, Vince and me,
We aren’t bank robbers or anything
We just wrote on the floor

DON’T FUCK THE FUZZ
BECAUSE THE FUZZ AREN’T CUNTS.
U ARE A CUNT THOUGH
IF YOU NICKED MY CAR.

Andrew Venner 2006.


Andrew Venner is a full time artist and writer. He is currently working on a collection of short peices about builders called 'Slindon Social'. He lives in worthing.

posted by scarecrow  # 3:22 AM

Wednesday, March 01, 2006

 

What I am really angry about?...

1. There is no national health care. Why does India have national health care and we don't. America has more money than india and less people. I am confused, I have a childlike confusion about this. I feel like a child who hit his sister, then his daddy tells him not to. Then daddy hits mommy. I am confused. I am so fucking confused by that. Also what confuses me is the fact that one bad action movie, just one can cost up to 100 million dollars to make and there is even one person in this world who doesn't have full health care.

2. Why don't we have a parliament like England or New Zealand, or every other industrialized nation where more parties can enter the political system. We have two, that is stupid. And there is no way to another get one in. That is stupid and backward. We have a dictatorship within a democracy. Iraq will probably have a better democracy than ours before all this is finished.

3. That the Republican party exists at all. It needs to be wiped off the face of the earth. And its leaders in office and in the media should be brought to court on crimes against humanity. Dig up Nixon.

The democrats should be the far right party. Throw in the Green Party and a Labor Party and some other kind of party, maybe an Information workers party. It would be great. The Republican party is all shit all the fucking time, and it has been for forty years. It does nothing but harm humanity. You can't even argue with them. We don't need to agree all the time, but fuck, those assholes aren't even in the ballpark.

4. We need to Recognize that computers and high-tech machines have changed the economic field. That it takes less people to produce more shit. Therefore less people are needed to create the products humanity needs. How many fucking cups do humans need. One example: In 1970 the chevy plant in youngstown needed 14,000 workers to produce its cars. Now it needs only 7,000. The number has been cut in half. Computers, technology, has and forever will be making the workforce needed smaller, not bigger.

5. America's extreme form of capitalism. First, there is no real justification for capitalism. Here is one example of the absurdism of what capitalism does. Magic Johnson, a famous basketball player bought 30 Starbucks. He just bought them. He gets the profits from coffee shops. Now Ayn Rand's version of capitalism is that they deserve the money because of their genius. Well, in reality capitalism has nothing to do with genius. He bought those, and he makes the money because he owns the instruments of production. He worked to become a famous basketball player. But he didn't do shit concerning coffee. and that's the reality of capitalism, a rich person buys the instruments of production and reaps the profits. and they get white collar people to design the products, and advertisements. They get normal people to make their products, design, and sell them.

A moment in my life: My friend's dad who worked at Kmart distribution when I was in high school came up to me and said, "You know who the highest paid person at Kmart is?" I said, "No." He said, "Kathy Ireland." The model appeared on the posters. Capitalism allows some random famous person to get paid more for one days worth of work, then the employees do all year.

Now, don't call me a commie. I don't have problems with local businesses, or even some person owning like five pizza shops etc. But fuck, some of this shit just don't make any fucking sense.

6. America needs to be weaned off of religion. This religious shit needs to die. There is no afterlife, God does not matter. I don't think taking away religion cold turkey would be very prudent , probably some violence would take place. But there needs to be a process where schools and the media show that thinking about religion is harmful to one's life. I would support and pay extra taxes to having people who were religious get counseling to help them with their low-self-esteems.

7. Racism needs to be stopped. The government actually needs to be pro-active about that. Being racist is not freedom of speech, it is fucking bullshit. People are born equal, that is a fact. You can't have an opinion on a fact.

"The fact that the citizens of our country are pretty complacent and do nothing to uproot the status quo?"

In history the bulk of humans of a certain country only disrupt the status quo during time of economic change. When a new instrument is placed into the economic field, the computer will eventually cause the uprooting.

But calling Americans complacent would be wrong. I know many uncomplacent, very angry people. Not punk rockers either. But regular, hard working americans, who are pissed. Look at the signs people are holding at Chevy rallies. Chevy is going bankrupt, the protesters are screaming for a political party that represents labor.

One the things about America's media, is they never show news like that.

Another example would be: In Youngstown last, there was a shoot out between gangs and the police. The gangs fired on the police. You don't fire a gun at the police if you are complacent. To explain the total event. In two days a gang war broke out, five people got shot. Two people just sitting in their house watching television. A woman was taken hostage. All kinds of crazy shit. A total third world scene right here in the America.

That was just in Youngstown, there are a good amount of areas in America worse than Youngstown. So I wouldn't be surprised more incidents like that have occured. (But I suppose that rich guy who killed his wife and went to england is more important and crucial to the survival of the american people.)

If the bulk of America was complacent why wouldn't they vote at all?

People don't vote because they see the options as shit. Or "disgusting" as a heard one woman say.

The problem isn't that they aren't complacent, its that no one bothers to learn what they want, to learn what they are like, what would make them leave their house and do something about it.

In my opinion: The working class and the poor are angry. And the only way to make things different in this country is to tap into that anger. To direct their anger. Instead of them being violent and mean to other people of their class. Show them why they are angry. Show them they are intelligent, that they can think and reason. That they are people too. That they are humans and need to be treated with respect.

One of the biggest problems, is the masochism of the poor and working class. They have been taught that they are dumb and that thinking is useless. For example Barbara Ehrenreich's book Nickel and Dimed. Her disguising herself and going down into the lower classes teaches that poor people are stupid. What she should have done is just did interviews with poor people. There is too strong of an emphasis on what college you went to, was it state or private, was it Harvard or Bowling Green, did you go at all.

I can easily imagine someone from Bowling Green discrediting what someone from a state university said, then I can imagine someone from Harvard discrediting what someone from Bowling Green said. Based solely on the fact where they went to school.

The academia must recognize that normal working people are intelligent. That if you show the facts, %90 of them will understand.

Example: I was work and talking to a 19 year old kid who didn't graduate high school. For some reason I told him about Chomsky's Critical Hypothesis Theory. How there are muscles in the brain that need to be used by the time a kid is seven, or they will never be able to use grammar. I said, "it is like a muscle, it needs to be used. etc." The kid understood.

Normal people understand facts.

I went to college for awhile. Political ideas aren't biology or physics. A political or a psychological idea, if it is any good and based in reality. Can be understood by anyone.

To finish this: I don't think communism will lead to there being no state, or that there will be a utopia, or that an utopia would even be very fun. But fuck, things could be better than this.W

Noah Cicero © 2006




Noah Cicero (born 1980) is an American novelist, essayist, playwright, short-story writer, and poet. He lives in Youngstown, Ohio, and is the author of two books of fiction:

The Human War [2003, Fugue State Press, New York]

The Condemned [2006, Six Gallery Press, Pennsylvania]

His stories, poetry, and essays have also been published extensively on the Internet. His prose is spare, extreme in its directness and force, and addresses with brutal Absurdist humor the day-to-day lives of urban-wasteland characters who are painfully aware of the futility of their existence. He notably depicts crumbling urban America, in particular the bars and strip clubs of Youngstown, with a bleak black humor. The work, while highly accessible, is imbued with political critique and an existential examination of reality. He has cited Sartre, Hemingway and Beckett as central influences.

His essays are both political and philosophical in nature, sometimes using the tools of psychology and philosophy to crucify those political leaders or followers he sees as acting in bad faith. Some of these essays have been written in collaboration with Ohio journalist Bernice Mullins.

posted by scarecrow  # 12:35 AM

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